Hehe, yeah, I was bored one day and I wrote a story. Now that I look back on it, I don't think it sucks that bad so here you go! IF you want to leave any feedback go ahead, but if theres something wrong with it tell me, don't just say "it sux LOLOLOLOLOLOL"
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Story I wrote ^_^
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Re: Story I wrote ^_^
"it sux LOLOLOLOLOLOL"Zaffron wrote:Hehe, yeah, I was bored one day and I wrote a story. Now that I look back on it, I don't think it sucks that bad so here you go! IF you want to leave any feedback go ahead, but if theres something wrong with it tell me, don't just say "it sux LOLOLOLOLOLOL"
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I doubt that would be an appropriate response to your story. You did a good job on this story.
The Assistant of the Clan. The White Orders.